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Peyton Carroll
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[continuation of last note]
but I feel that to create paranoia and an unsettling presence, don't define the word right of way, let the readers figure it out, and have the characters know that's happening. Let us, the readers, be in the dark. that's a thrilling reversed-situational irony: the characters know but the reader doesn't.
— Aug 25, 2024 08:18AM
but I feel that to create paranoia and an unsettling presence, don't define the word right of way, let the readers figure it out, and have the characters know that's happening. Let us, the readers, be in the dark. that's a thrilling reversed-situational irony: the characters know but the reader doesn't.
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Peyton Carroll
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ive been meaning to make a note of this.
there's probably a reason to define AUDITE in the beginning. as I continue to read, that word just breaks my concentration. maybe it's so that whenever the characters allude to the audite, we the readers are reminded of what's it doing. if they have to watch what they're saying, so should we.
— Aug 25, 2024 08:16AM
there's probably a reason to define AUDITE in the beginning. as I continue to read, that word just breaks my concentration. maybe it's so that whenever the characters allude to the audite, we the readers are reminded of what's it doing. if they have to watch what they're saying, so should we.
Peyton Carroll
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there are moments where I want to learn more about the environment, the government–simply put, I want to know what the outside world is. There are many moments where the scene rushes and not much is explained.
— Aug 25, 2024 08:09AM
