Damaged142’s Reviews > Omega Rising > Status Update

This is probably the fastest I've ever picked up and then put a book right back down. The writing is super basic. "he did this, he did that, he paused, he hesitated." all very repetitive."the night was cold", "the aircraft was obviously damaged—badly—and it also had obviously landed, not crashed". Telling us what is happening and failing to show it.

Maybe I'm being too harsh, but this failed to capture my interest