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Kerry A
is on page 12 of 337
Badly in need of editing
Pg 12, 4th paragraph: “Martin bagged her to share.” Presumably this was supposed to be “begged.” This is there are two or three others that I’ve noticed and it’s only pg 12 ( ;﹏; )
— Sep 22, 2024 07:56PM
Pg 12, 4th paragraph: “Martin bagged her to share.” Presumably this was supposed to be “begged.” This is there are two or three others that I’ve noticed and it’s only pg 12 ( ;﹏; )
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Kerry’s Previous Updates
Kerry A
is on page 220 of 337
I keep getting sucked out of the story by silly mistakes. “He reached for Zane’s throw.” :((
— Sep 24, 2024 07:09AM
Kerry A
is on page 172 of 337
I very badly want them to have the “what are we?” talk ( ˶•ᴖ•) !!
— Sep 23, 2024 07:49PM
Kerry A
is on page 154 of 337
Moving … to the training facility … with Zane … for safety (˵ ¬ᴗ¬˵) now we’re cookin with gas
— Sep 23, 2024 03:02PM
Kerry A
is on page 69 of 337
Disregard previous update; I misread! This one’s on me
My apologies (づ ᴗ _ᴗ)づ♡
— Sep 23, 2024 06:05AM
My apologies (づ ᴗ _ᴗ)づ♡
Kerry A
is on page 69 of 337
On page 69, Zane‘s apartment is described as a studio, but on page 70 it’s described as having one bedroom. A studio is one big room (no bedroom), a one bedroom apartment is a one bedroom apartment
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— Sep 23, 2024 06:03AM
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Kerry A
is on page 13 of 337
I just found another error (˃̣̣̥ᯅ˂̣̣̥) pg 13 paragraph 2 “relieving crushed cars on the street below,” I assume this is supposed to be “revealing”
— Sep 22, 2024 08:00PM
