Kerry A’s Reviews > The Not So Super Hero > Status Update

I keep getting sucked out of the story by silly mistakes. “He reached for Zane’s throw.” :((

I very badly want them to have the “what are we?” talk ( ˶•ᴖ•) !!

Moving … to the training facility … with Zane … for safety (˵ ¬ᴗ¬˵) now we’re cookin with gas

Fweakin finally ( ʃƪ˘ﻬ˘)(˘ ε˘ʃƪ)

JuUuUust kiss already

Disregard previous update; I misread! This one’s on me

My apologies (づ ᴗ _ᴗ)づ♡

On page 69, Zane‘s apartment is described as a studio, but on page 70 it’s described as having one bedroom. A studio is one big room (no bedroom), a one bedroom apartment is a one bedroom apartment

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I just found another error (˃̣̣̥ᯅ˂̣̣̥) pg 13 paragraph 2 “relieving crushed cars on the street below,” I assume this is supposed to be “revealing”

Badly in need of editing

Pg 12, 4th paragraph: “Martin bagged her to share.” Presumably this was supposed to be “begged.” This is there are two or three others that I’ve noticed and it’s only pg 12 ( ;﹏; )