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WOOF page one we got the use of reek (stank) when it should be wreaked (wrought)
— Oct 13, 2024 11:39PM
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MAKE UP YOUR MIND. is he too weak to be saved as he bleeds out in the stables or is he strong enough to tell his whole fucking life story. cause it can’t be both
— Oct 14, 2024 03:09PM
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it’s not a compelling start and it’s got a fair bit of editing it needs
— Oct 14, 2024 10:01AM
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we got some nice atmosphere but some minor redundancies as well
— Oct 13, 2024 11:42PM
