orinianao’s Reviews > Truthwitch > Status Update
orinianao
is 54% done
Really good so far. My only gripe with this would be the narrator/author referring to the black girl as black. Whilst this character might be considered black in our modern-day context, she wouldn’t in the world building of this novel. There has been no indication of a history of racism and discrimination - hence the term ‘black’ feels misplaced..
— Oct 29, 2024 07:40AM
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orinianao
is 25% done
Good world building, tho I don’t feel like we’ve made significant progress w/in the storyline…
— Oct 14, 2024 11:16AM

