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is on page 67 of 136
so what’s the fucking plot. is this about fin going nuts? is this about escaping abuse? is this about her child seemingly possessed by a demon? about generational trauma?? about her missing mother???? pick a plot cause using all of them and removing the impact and nuance from all of them
— Nov 03, 2024 12:17PM
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is on page 43 of 136
completely lacking any connective tissue or nuance needed to make this plot points feel like anything other than an inner monologue of nails being hammered
— Nov 03, 2024 11:27AM
g
is on page 16 of 136
really just hammering in the plot. not leaving much up to interpretation
— Nov 03, 2024 09:29AM
