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Pati
is 42% done
What?! .... this is way too disjointed! Time jump.... told how easily they could go under... middle of conversation about some girls birthday party. SMH..... if this wasn't book two of a series I would DNF it. This is truly ridiculous
— Nov 06, 2024 04:13AM
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Pati
is 42% done
Now it's two weeks later! Damn! SMH.... Hell, we not only seeing anyone get to know each other but we don't even know it Max got his coat back. SMH....
— Nov 06, 2024 04:09AM
Pati
is 37% done
Well, it's now obvious that it wasn't an error.... apparently the author doesn't want to bother letting us see them start over getting to know each other. Apparently she just wanted to jump right into a sex scene. 😒😡🤬
— Nov 06, 2024 04:00AM
Pati
is 36% done
WTF?! Massive jump.... "Can I buy you a beer?".... next paragraph naked, in bed..... SMH.... I keep thinking that this is a publishing error.... a scene disappeared.... So disjointed.
— Nov 06, 2024 03:50AM