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Paul
Paul is 36% done
lots of interesting subplots intertwining with main plot, but thus far story seems to be all over the place. hopefully everything will intersect satisfactory soon, also this book seems to have 1/2 dozen major characters but no true MC. so far I am not hating this enough to DNF but not loving it either.
Apr 18, 2016 05:43AM
The Immortal Body

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Paul
Paul is 66% done
starting to come together with solid but unexceptional writing.
Apr 23, 2016 12:23PM
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Paul
Paul is 36% done
Apr 18, 2016 05:39AM
The Immortal Body


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