Zarah’s Reviews > Few Are Angels > Status Update
Zarah
is 10% done
Nooooooo!! Plz don't ruin this perfectly readable book by adding in instalove and an annoyingly rude dude that the MC inexpicably has to luuuurve... Pleeease!!
— Apr 28, 2016 03:19AM
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Zarah
is 28% done
Yeah. Doubt I'll finish this, it gets worse as it "progresses"...
— May 08, 2016 09:33AM
Zarah
is 25% done
““What the hell?” I whispered , shocked and allured by his speed. My stomach trembled at the thought of how powerful he truly was, but excitement pushed it away." Ugh. Please.
— May 08, 2016 02:37AM
Zarah
is 22% done
"I let his words sink in. He’d called them memories." Actually... he didn't. Did the proof reader take a day off around this bit of the book?...
— May 07, 2016 09:01AM
Zarah
is 22% done
Gleaming and shining... Why can't The Dude ever be kinda normal looking, even if he's a vampire or whatever...? And who describes a person line that, anyway?
— May 07, 2016 08:59AM
Zarah
is 22% done
Context errors, repetitive language and the insta-knowledge of stuff is a bit annoying... but it's still mostly a good read.
— May 07, 2016 08:56AM
