Zarah’s Reviews > Few Are Angels > Status Update

““What the hell?” I whispered , shocked and allured by his speed. My stomach trembled at the thought of how powerful he truly was, but excitement pushed it away." Ugh. Please.

"I let his words sink in. He’d called them memories." Actually... he didn't. Did the proof reader take a day off around this bit of the book?...

Gleaming and shining... Why can't The Dude ever be kinda normal looking, even if he's a vampire or whatever...? And who describes a person line that, anyway?

Context errors, repetitive language and the insta-knowledge of stuff is a bit annoying... but it's still mostly a good read.

Uhm... Footprints...??

Nooooooo!! Plz don't ruin this perfectly readable book by adding in instalove and an annoyingly rude dude that the MC inexpicably has to luuuurve... Pleeease!!