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Rhode PVD
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Doris Day and rolling bums (as in mugging the homeless) are mentioned, which is awfully old fashioned language for an 18 year old. I would assume this story was set 50 years ago, but there's also a Lexus and text messaging.
— May 26, 2016 11:41AM
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Rhode PVD
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What kid automatically accuses his honorary uncle/father figure of having sex with him when he is too drunk to remember? That's just not the first thought that should ever spring to his mind.
— May 26, 2016 11:47AM
Rhode PVD
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“I could spin a tale of fortune and destiny that would require many rounds before it reached the shores of credibility," ok so this is the kind of pseudo Celtic dialogue that I hate. Hope the rest of this book doesn't fall in this same style
— May 26, 2016 11:37AM
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So far the word "lest" has shown up in external dialogue and "macking" in internal dialogue. Neither are a good sign of things to come - old fashioned and over-writing.
— May 26, 2016 11:27AM
