Status Updates From Murder at Pride Lodge (Kyle...

It's just overly written. There's way too much telling and not showing, and way too much time spent on stuff that's unimportant. Nothing about the previous hostess is important to this story. And if the previous owners of the lodge don't turn out to be important to the story…

There’s a lot of unnecessary backstory for unimportant characters

This needs a decent editor. Not only mind numbingly boring but it can't stay on track.... it meanders around different subjects mid paragraph. Zzzzzz

WTH? POV jumps galore. Sudden, unnecessary POVs from so many random people.

Are you kidding me?! I thought this was a mystery. The reader isn't supposed to be told all of this when the "bad guy" is introduced in the beginning. SMH...

Zzzzzzz..... I keep hoping this will get better. Less coma inducing. Zzzzzz

Zzzzzzzzzzzz..... So boring. It's a shame that I bought all but one of the books in this series because I can't even get into this first one. It's oddly written and long drawn out info dumps.

..when you need a spreadsheet to keep track of the 30+ characters