Pati’s Reviews > Murder at Pride Lodge > Status Update

This needs a decent editor. Not only mind numbingly boring but it can't stay on track.... it meanders around different subjects mid paragraph. Zzzzzz

WTH? POV jumps galore. Sudden, unnecessary POVs from so many random people.

Are you kidding me?! I thought this was a mystery. The reader isn't supposed to be told all of this when the "bad guy" is introduced in the beginning. SMH...

Zzzzzzzzzzzz..... So boring. It's a shame that I bought all but one of the books in this series because I can't even get into this first one. It's oddly written and long drawn out info dumps.