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Pati is 3% done

Zzzzzzzzzzzz..... So boring. It's a shame that I bought all but one of the books in this series because I can't even get into this first one. It's oddly written and long drawn out info dumps.

— May 13, 2021 12:43PM

Murder at Pride Lodge (Kyle Callahan Mystery, #1)

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Pati is 26% done

This needs a decent editor. Not only mind numbingly boring but it can't stay on track.... it meanders around different subjects mid paragraph. Zzzzzz

— May 13, 2021 02:25PM

Pati is 14% done

WTH? POV jumps galore. Sudden, unnecessary POVs from so many random people.

— May 13, 2021 01:29PM

Pati is 11% done

Are you kidding me?! I thought this was a mystery. The reader isn't supposed to be told all of this when the "bad guy" is introduced in the beginning. SMH...

— May 13, 2021 01:20PM

Pati is 10% done

Zzzzzzz..... I keep hoping this will get better. Less coma inducing. Zzzzzz

— May 13, 2021 01:14PM