Pati’s Reviews > Murder at Pride Lodge > Status Update
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is 11% done
Are you kidding me?! I thought this was a mystery. The reader isn't supposed to be told all of this when the "bad guy" is introduced in the beginning. SMH...
— May 13, 2021 01:20PM
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Pati
is 26% done
This needs a decent editor. Not only mind numbingly boring but it can't stay on track.... it meanders around different subjects mid paragraph. Zzzzzz
— May 13, 2021 02:25PM
Pati
is 14% done
WTH? POV jumps galore. Sudden, unnecessary POVs from so many random people.
— May 13, 2021 01:29PM
Pati
is 10% done
Zzzzzzz..... I keep hoping this will get better. Less coma inducing. Zzzzzz
— May 13, 2021 01:14PM
Pati
is 3% done
Zzzzzzzzzzzz..... So boring. It's a shame that I bought all but one of the books in this series because I can't even get into this first one. It's oddly written and long drawn out info dumps.
— May 13, 2021 12:43PM
