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Jen_C
is 83% done
Writing style is bringing this down a bit. It is not a good sign when I am pulled out of the story trying to figure out if the logistics and details being given are actually possible. I find myself asking "is he Gumby?" " How did he lift he like that from that position?" I want to be engaged in the story not the minutiae.......
— Dec 28, 2014 03:24PM
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Jen_C
is 41% done
Harper is a bit abrupt and brash but hopefully she softens just enough to be likeable.
— Dec 27, 2014 08:44PM
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Molly
is 84% done
How the hell does a persons tattoo cast a shadow on another person skin? WTF?!
— Feb 04, 2014 06:19PM
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Molly
is 85% done
Boring, overly dramatic prose. Why you two words when you can use 17? Don't really much care about these people. Must everything hit them like a ton of bricks, a bold of lightening, a punch to the gut...ugh!
— Feb 04, 2014 03:20PM
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