Status Updates From Aicha

I don't think "carnage" is the right word to use here, bc the author hasn't shown us anyone getting killed yet. Beaten, yes, but that's not carnage

typo missing question mark

also typo I think "heavy footed" should be hyphenated

"Samira nodded. "Try to unlock it silently."
"Obviously." Aicha almost scoffed. Instead, she made sure her steps were heavy footed, splashing into the puddles as she splashed Samira."
no I'm sorry Aicha is pissing me off. She wants everyone to treat her like she's not a child, and yet when she gets an order, she deliberately acts like a child. Are we not worried someone could hear the water splashing? omfg

yeah I get Aicha's frustrations, but this is not the fcking time girl. Your plan was conjured up in a day or so; you need to get a grip, this is not about you

typo run-on

typo run-on

typo "in-between" shouldn't be hyphenated in this case

Although this hits home since I practice the religion, sometimes I couldn't take the side characters seriously. It felt weird seeing my cousin and neighbors' names😭

Astaghfirullah: "I seek forgiveness from Allah"