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Loving the sexual tension... it’s killing me!

I was so excited to start this book, but so far I feel like it's dragged on. I keep waiting for something to happen and it just isn't. It's not very often I stop reading a book and I"m not giving up on this one yet, but I AM taking a break and reading other things. Can anyone tell me what they thought of it? Should I keep going?

Finally!!!!!!!!

I'm still finding some grammar issues and I'm definitely not connecting. The sexual tension between the characters needs to be addressed. Kat is still annoying me, Ryker is supposed to be sweet but I'm not seeing anything other than the tutoring to describe him as such. I wish there was more editing, there's still a lot of unnecessary info in my eyes

I was contacted by the author and sent a better edited version of the book. The grammar has improved, the commas have not, and I'm still not connecting with the character or the story.

"I was more than convinced that although he might be the hottest man I’ve ever seen, Ryker Eddison is an asshole!" - I'm officially suffering through this book. I can't even. I'm going to read up to chapter 10 and if I'm still suffering I am dnfing.

LOL at him growling.