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If feels too much like a rough draft.

I like the concept of the book but not enjoying the ride.

I don't care for Zusef's sub-plot storyline. I don't care about Brandi or Zoo to see their separate pov. I still detest Zay lying. I'm not invested in seeing the sex it out either. I was disappointed that Prime immediately said "oh ok. I mean I was a little mad but here's my dick". I wish Prime still moved as a protector but paused intimacy until trust rebuilt. 50-leven things going on and the MCs I care least about

Going into this skeptically I'm glad I read up to 17% but it's also a reminder as to why I wasn't gagged or excited by the end of Book 1 to move forward.

It's odd I should be in love with yet....

Tried hanging in there but this was not it. The MMC having a stutter and speech difficulties alongside the FMC being a Midwife is why I gave it a shot as long as I did. But too many hurdles. Background for the MMC didnt feel solid and the FMC being 26 and a Midwife for 10 years and working with high level clients was a big nopester. Midwifery takes years of learning/practice. Dialogue wasn't it either.

I know authors say sometimes things aren't that deep but the way Shvonne wrote Leland was pitch perfect

Couture is the most out of pocket, disrespectful person to her boyfriend-but- how- could- he- be-her- fiancé everrrr......and I love it.

The way Couture lies in this dudes face is hi-lar-ious. She's gaslighting like a muthafucker 🤣🤣.

Is she insane!

This scene makes no fucking sense.

Valli is a little bit of an odd character. She doesn't always read the room nor consider how to make lemons out of lemonade using the info she has

I'm going to need for her to be a little bit more with it thab that because really really really

Is he a #niggainglasses or no

He's promising to kill anyone who hurts her and she thinks that's a little extreme. I think this is a love story! That's some romantic shit!

Beginning was slow as hell but this....this....this....yesssssd

Swoon....just full on swoon

Every woman who cheats on her fiance with the love of her life needs a friend like Bambi. 🫰🏾

Couture knowing she's the very person she despises is wild! Lol. She's sitting here like "I ain't shit" and ::annoying Drake voice::🎤 I agree-eeee

When a man says my wife 🥰🤗

Girl is letting her fiancé stop her from being with the love of her life 😂. Hiw very Ghost-coded of her

Couture leaving the Love of her life bc she thought he wanted babies & then moving on to the next dude who def wants a blood legacy, while thinking she could finagle it is sooo her. Lol. It made no sense but I love her nonsensical delulu ass. Realized Khari's story didn't need the cray OW

The story is dragging it gives you every single minute no matter how mundane. So a lot of the emotional beats and inner dialogue is repetitive. Not having Aiden's pov sooner hurts the flow

Pure sex. Khari so sexy I don't know how Couture didn't just slip the panties to the side anyway. That's right Khari boss up and tell her if her fiance comes in you'll whoop his ass! That's some "yes daddy energy" right there

Couture is so wishy washy with Leland and I don't know why but it tickles me seriously. Chuckling at his confusion. He's all "babeee I decided your professional name will be Lewis" ::sad face:: and Couture's stomach is touching her back from the pain of having that dude's name. LOVE-IT!

Ohmygod looking bathroom doors so your man doesn't surprise you with uneventful shower sex 🤣🤣🤣. This is your PENANCE Couture! This is your karma for breaking poor Khari's heart 🤭

Ms "I feel like a horrible person for leading Leland on" Couture will have me cracking up on this reread. YOU SHOULD! 😄 You are handsdown in the wrong. 🤣 And I can't bring myself to care either. 🤷🏾‍♀️