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DNF @ 58%

I don’t care that this is erotica. I care that it’s bad erotica. The sex scenes are terrible and repetitive. The author trying to make the scenes so nasty and filthy that they forget how to write from point a to point b. There was zero build up. What was the point of the prologue? That could have been left out cause what happened in the prologue is repeated later in the book.

Were folks scrolling through their phones in 2009?

I feel like this is a setup and if it is I’m gonna be pissed

This book would be better if it wasn’t for this Tyler Perry type character Ziva. Every time she pops up on the page I’m annoyed. These shenanigans were not needed.

The FMC is 34 with a 19 year old son?! Ooooookaayyy 🥴

Devon is dumb like most men

The FMC is already getting on my nerves. She is currently making $0 due to losing her job but is hesitant to interview for a nanny job that’s paying $150k?!?! Dumb bitch alert!!!

Having this conversation on the phone while af work is NOT a good idea Octavia!

I have a feeling this is going to be a slow burn

Organ harvesting as a content warning?!?!

How is he physically able to have sex after being in a car accident with a broken leg and abdominal surgery that happened less than 48 hours prior? Is he Superman or some shit?

This bama left his church socks on?! He didn’t have an extra pair of white socks in his bag?

I already hate Lot and her attitude but I’m gonna try to give her a chance

Jodi is annoying as fck. I remember why I initially DNF this book. I’m gonna power through since I’ve gotten this far

DNF. Not in the mood for this one.

Oh so this hoe is supposed to be Goldilocks? I guess cause she pissed me off already breaking the window and eating the food. She couldn’t pee outside?

Previously DNF. Giving it another chance since I’m in a dark romance mood.

Nadine ain’t shit. Eddie should kick her out the house and divorce her cheating ass. DNF!

Take a shot every time we’re told that Concrete’s 🍆 is 9.5 inches.

Who walks around smith a vibrator in their purse? And then uses it while at a party?

Oh this btch is dumb

I’m gonna skim the rest of this book cause Alisa’s negativity is pmo. I have a friend exactly like her. All she does is complain. Sees the negative in everything. It’s exhausting. Be miserable and alone then btch.

Why are they having this hella confidential discussion in a public restaurant? Being loud as hell. Alisa and Nadine get on my nerves

DNF

The stupid nickname is annoying me

This is inconsistent as hell. Drew lamenting on how his wife won’t do freaky sex stuff but earlier in the book he rebuffed her when she wanted to have sex on their veranda.

They need to get divorced. There’s no coming back from whatever the fck both of them are doing. And apparently there’s a part 2?!?!!!