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you couldn't manage to write Morrigan & Cassian from their sides!! honestly, why's it so hard to do so?! you still say "Mor" or "Cassian", "she, her" or "he, him" like still Feyre tells their stories!! she's not even with them most of the time. you could only change it to "I & me" 🤦🏻‍♀️😤

"does she relax" is a question sentence and doesn't state a situation like you intended, it should be "she does relax" - "keeps himself to himself" also not written like that, is supposed to be "he keeps to himself" - English isn't my first language but I try to pay attention, this is so sloppy!! there are too many mistakes for my liking and she didn't even tried to fix them even though people commented on some...

"still long way to go to get to the pack house" should have been "still long way to the pack house" - I have seen somewhere that this one been fixed and it's name changed but I'm reading it with this one and it has writing mistake in it; like she wrote "too" instead of "to" or like first one. also, why did she keep adding Alpha or Beta to in front of the names, just one would be enough to identify them.

"We had both fought for that love, bled for it. Rhys died for it." and I think that I Really didn't see you much do anything for it, for him. other than the thing you did when Hybern King took you all because of YOU!! and even though it's foolish, it's the right thing to do at the moment. also, he died because of you, too.

"We had both fought for that love, bled for it. Rhys died for it." and I think that I Really didn't see you much do anything for it, for him. other than the thing you did when Hybern King took you all because of YOU!! and even though it's foolish, it's the right thing to do at the moment. also, he died because of you, too.

writer's biggest mistake was to write all of the chapters from Feyre's point of view, in fact that some of them and especially battle chapters SHOULD HAVE written from RHYSAND's point of view.
Morrigan is a selfish c*nt! she says that she felt safe at Velaris, at their sides But she couldn't tell Azriel that she prefers women?! what a BULLSHIT!! I kinda liked her before but now, not so much.

sometimes I think the writers Really doesn't care their readers! if not so, why would you write a such a despicable, repelling and hateable sibling to someone like Feyre?! I don't care how beautiful Feyre describes Nesta, she's rotten inside and I don't think anything can change my mind! and the other whiny little b*tch Elaine! *argh* on top of it Feyre yells at Rhys?! for THEM?! you like how they treat you all along

I'm really tired of this thing in these genre of books that they call "bravery" while it's actually selfishness!! she couldn't just do it without shutting out Rhysand and somehow he's SO VERY okay with it afterwards?! supposedly she's taking revenge and protecting those people but does she have to do it like that?! I think NOT!! it's SO Dumb when you're just learning your powers. I have so many things about that part

I'm glad that she finally saw what Tamlin actually did to her. Thanked Rhysand for what he'd done for her, it's a nice moment. he deserve it no matter what because he didn't locked her for her powers like a captive in te name of love. I don't think Tamlin ever loved her, even Lucien treated better than him to her. I hated Ianthe since the first moment I've read about her, slimy little c*nt!! disgusting!

I think book's cover did a little injustice to Cullen.

I don't understand what the writer tries to achieve in this book; if she really says that at the end Xaden wouldn't be normal again or something like that, what's the purpose of reading this along?? Just to be frustrated at the end rather than now??? (it seems like that's the purpose) There's the same things again and again, there's only little excitements in it and this doesn't feel like the first two books at all

this is getting boring by the minute, it feels so stupid of them when you think that she found all the solutions in weeks at other two books but when it comes to this it's like she stalling to just to give us that Xaden can't be cured, even worse he'll die. and as I said before I would give 1s. or none if it happens. for the moment I'm debating if this one even worth 3s. *sigh*

I hate General Aetos and people like him in the book. You're a prof. after all, act like it! What would you want from your students?? Stupid!!
Also, I really wished that you bookish people would be more careful about giving spoilers. really hate it. The little think you write or say can make others/me think million things and if something bas will happen to Xaden at the end I will give it one star.

I hate General Aetos and people like him in the book. You're a prof. after all, act like it! What would you want from your students?? Stupid!!
Also, I really wished that you bookish people would be more careful about giving spoilers. really hate it. The little think you write or say can make others/me million things and if something bas will happen to Xaden at the end I will give it one star.

every time I read him saying her name after EVERY F**king sentence, even when it's not necessary, is make me wanna puke!! he is so annoying that I don't understand how she loved him!! and I also don't understand how people liked this book so much?!

doesn't it should be "he's still breathing. call an Ambulance" rather than "call a bus!" and the drawings looks like they're at their fifties and at work rather than they're collage students. I know that it's a graphic novel, like a comic book but this drawings are so bad, almost disgusting. you took away all their beauty you told in the novel.

I started reading this a year ago and it's story is overwhelmingly painful and goes so slow that i couldn't continue it to start the growing part, so left reading. now, I'm thinking to continue it, hope that I can finish it.

I don't understand why is that almost every writer has to choose to use white hair at some point in their story! even though there's nothing that summons that kind of change like in this story. it was stupidly absurd in my opinion and I hated that chapter.

I truly don't understand how are they forgot about the Crown, it was crystal and Fiera's father was wearing it, no? they say they'll need all of them yet they only focused on the sword. probably it's already gone!
I hate that Vi changes her name like someone would have recognize her even if she would say her own name! it's so stupid honestly. don't understand what was the writer thinking when she wrote it like that

Sarphos repeatedly says that Taavin is a vile/bad man and he did some terrible things etc. but Vi insisting on that she know him better is gave me loughs that I didn't enjoyed. after all that happened with Jayme she still can't allow herself to think that he might have lied to her whole this time while they're talking. always pushing back to senses to not hurt them; so familiar feelings!

she should suspect from him eventually, before everything comes to and end. AND she should get rid off from those Adeala and Fallor so she could save her father! C'MON ALREADY

since I read saying them that she's looks like the reincarnate of Fiera Solaris a few times, I had this theory that the women who said her name's Vi and helped Vhalla in original books was her, Fiera, but introduce herself like that and... maybe Vhalla gave that name to her daughter because of that?

I don't understand why's Romulin so insisted on his father is dead and against the idea of he might not be...?

the way Craig acts towards Daniel is so very ANNOYING! What a peace of sh*t!! just because he doesn't want to lose his place at Rylynn's side!? it's another disgustingly annoying thing, to mock with someone just because of that!!

when he seemed to know many things when he was talking in the main books, I've realized that he doesn't know much about any matter or about his brother Aldrik. as she said to him, don't put the blame only to Aldrik just to lie yourself.

wish he didn't died so young and so early.