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Issac is acting very needy...it feels i am reading a high school romance not mafia romance

Lake aggressively bites Nix on his shoulder in the middle of a serious altercation...was just so out of blue

How have the demons not found Nix motives....how hard is to find that his dead cousin attended foxglove and that she killed herself. Wouldn't it be public knowledge if one just cares to look for it???
So dumb....biggest plot hole

Its so boring. All scenes and interactions seems pointless. Nothing seems to be drawing me in for the story. I feel no anticipation for what will happen next.

The codependency between mmcs is nauseating. Hope they get over it. If there is no character development then this would be such a waste of time

M :"If you weren’t so breath-taking when you cry, I wouldn’t be so tempted to make you cry.”
T : “You said I look ugly when I cry.”
M : “Not when you cry for me. You should see how you look when you cry for me. "

Not romantic!!!! didnt expect Mal to be a red flag guy. Had such high hopes for him

“I’ve overcome more fearsome challenges than an angry old god.” Charles is at the forefront of my mind.

Seroiusly charles>>> angry old god????🙄

Back and forth between two different times takes some getting use to. I still dont know when the "now" is

Forced dialogues and too much exposition.

“Tell me, is your insolence purposeful or do you hide behind it so no one sees how stupid you are?”
Sabine says this to our FMC...and that's exactly my thought...infact she is not hiding behind her insolence or being purposefully insolent. She is just plain old stupid.

So far not enjoying it. There is no chemistry between the MCs. Tempted to put it on DNF

Off to bad start. Banter is cringe. Sounds so forced almost like a script in your head...where you think it sounds cool but in reality its so cringe.

"Obviously, that was who she was talking about; Mariana was staring straight at Sloane’s square on the screen"
It's a zoom meeting with everyone connected from their own PC and so everyone's square placement on their screen is different you cannot tell who is looking at who.
Be calm...suspend the disbelief...God I can't..it's so annoying. I can't the look the other way

Last 30 pages are a drag. Powering through to finish it

"and though it needed major work, the right team for the right price could get the job done in two months. I happily paid that price out of my own pocket."

What own pocket...he hasnt earned any money in his entire life...what "own pocket"

"and though it needed major work, the right team for the right price could get the job done in two months. I happily paid that price out of my own pocket."

What own pocket...he hasnt earned any money in his entire life...what "own pocket"

Its fiction...i get all suspension of disbelief...but come on you cant know if it was arson or not. Shaved off wires and placed just so it would catch fire...not even sherlock can come up with that cause post fire, evidence would be burnt.
If there was trace of say gasoline or some fire acccelerant that was found , sure arson...fire i spectors are not incompetent.

Just need to get this over with...its been going on for too long. I can't stand Tory and Darcy anymore.

They need a win, all souless creatures are siding with Lionel...uggh. When will this torture end.
Tharix is showing some promises. I hope he somehow ends up on Darius' side because of his mild obsession of his brother.