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Who speaks like this?

“I have a PhD. I’ve done years of research and submitted articles to the Bulletin of the American Meteorological Society. I’ve worked my ass off for a position like this”

The truth or dare is so repetitive. It doesn’t make it “their thing”.
The nickname is repetitive.

I am still boreeedddddddd! What is going on?

The reason the writing so far feels a bit cringey is because it’s doing too much telling and not enough showing. Like you’re telling us too much about what the characters are like and not showing us.

Chelsea! What is this???

“Is the senior meteorologist job where you’re on-air for ten minutes a night too much work for the guy who poses with his Jeep in social media photos?”

“I’d rather get a root canal than see you smile”

💀 girl

Bad humor exhibit A

“I hear seven minutes in heaven can be a blast. I promise I’ll make you see the stars.”

“The only thing I want to do with your arrogant ass is crush you academically.”

Too cringey. No human being actually speaks like this.

Chelsea!!! You’re such an amazing writer (and a master at writing hot scenes) but you’re trying to be funny and it’s coming across as too try hard!! Just lean on your genius!

Ch1 - starts slow and a bit boring.

The story was way too far fetched and I lost interest for the characters quite quickly.

Crazyyyyy!! So illegal.

Had my husband brand me like I was a piece of cattle he owns.

Nope. I refuse to believe that women lust over strange men on social media and fantasize about giving them BJ without knowing a single thing about them.

Started reading this completely blind (all I knew it was a sports MM romance) and holy cow.

It’s not as good as god of fury. It’s okay.

Well, I am laughing a lot. This book definitely feels different from the rest. May I say it’s the best?

Man, this book is rough with the infertility. I can’t imagine how hard would to read that with the trauma of infertility.