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The secrets are starting to interfere with the story. A whole lot of nothing to keep me invested. Hope this changes soon.

I am poking so many holes in this plot. Like have you ever heard of a lock on the hero’s door so some bitch doesn’t come in? Or the fact they can’t find the address of someone? Or the fact that these men seem to be inept at most things?

Several punctuation mistakes already. The quotes marks are missing or not in the right places. Makes reading the story very awkward.

We go from night to day with a spanking we never see and an anal plug we didn’t know she was wearing. So if this is your first full night on the contract shouldn’t the author let us see how it goes without popping in an anal plug that comes out for an ass fucking? Shouldn’t we know he spanked her hat enough to leave a handprint? You don’t just gloss over this shit for a reader.

This is sooooo long

This is a longgggg book. It feels like it is going in slow motion even as I read faster or even skim whole chapters.

Um, I don’t think this is a long story. Can’t believe I am 50% done in an hour. Wish there was a little more showing than telling. And maybe slow this down some.

Audio book I can get done in 2 hours...it going to end in a cliffhanger so hope the rest of the books are out.

I was kind of skeptical, but I am now a fan. I am loving the hero and know he is too good to be true.

I am in love with these characters. They feel so real to me in many ways that most stories don't hit upon.

This might be the death bell on this book. Hero is a dipshit and no way is he worth any more of my time reading about him.

This might be the death bell on this book. Hero is a dipshit and no way is he worth any more of my time reading about him.

Not far in and already I don’t like the hero. He left her without saying good-bye, but he also abandon his family because he wasn’t man enough to deal with the pain of losing his mom. So I was trying to get past those points when he apologizes to Lexi for leaving and basically never thinking if her again when he asks her out in a date. Yeah she shut him down, but he takes it as a challenge with no thought of her

Not exactly liking or hating this one. Just blah.

I am not sure if I got a badly edited copy or if no one has noticed this switches views between characters from one sentence to another making me feel like I am playing ping pong.

Way to much dialog. Need some action where the sounds come from nature not mouth of these characters. And they need to grow up some. They come across as teenagers bragging about their hardons.