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Sue Child
is 90% done
KINDLE NOTES/SPOILERS
secondary-character-led Black Moment
— Mar 02, 2025 12:28AM
secondary-character-led Black Moment
Sue Child
is 78% done
KINDLE NOTES/SPOILERS
Going to Spain doesn't really make sense here
— Mar 02, 2025 12:23AM
Going to Spain doesn't really make sense here
Sue Child
is 57% done
KINDLE NOTES/SPOILERS
the feeling of furious betrayal Jealousy is a bit much here
— Mar 02, 2025 12:22AM
the feeling of furious betrayal Jealousy is a bit much here
Sue Child
is 56% done
SPOILERS
the way your dad lied time after time to your mum This is very different and don't think she should conflate the two
— Mar 02, 2025 12:19AM
the way your dad lied time after time to your mum This is very different and don't think she should conflate the two
Sue Child
is 53% done
KINDLE NOTES. SPOILERS
Good. Glad he realised he'd be taking advantage of her memory loss.
— Mar 02, 2025 12:18AM
Good. Glad he realised he'd be taking advantage of her memory loss.
Sue Child
is 47% done
SPOILERS
The dr tells her she's a virgin! This really doesn’t work. Tests for a brain injury/trauma don’t usually include internals! Unless I’m missing something. Quite a big suspension of disbelief hurdle to get over. There’s a conversation that needs to be had, but would prefer it to be character-led.
— Mar 02, 2025 12:15AM
The dr tells her she's a virgin! This really doesn’t work. Tests for a brain injury/trauma don’t usually include internals! Unless I’m missing something. Quite a big suspension of disbelief hurdle to get over. There’s a conversation that needs to be had, but would prefer it to be character-led.
Sue Child
is 30% done
SPOILERS
Lorry crash breaks their emotional impasse. Would prefer it to be character-led. Forced together emotionally because she has engagement ring stuck on her finger/amnesia so plot-led engagement.
— Mar 02, 2025 12:09AM
Lorry crash breaks their emotional impasse. Would prefer it to be character-led. Forced together emotionally because she has engagement ring stuck on her finger/amnesia so plot-led engagement.
Sue Child
is 22% done
SPOILERS
ring stuck on finger small suspension of disbelief in the scheme of things and it's near the beginning
— Mar 02, 2025 12:05AM
ring stuck on finger small suspension of disbelief in the scheme of things and it's near the beginning
