Rachel’s Reviews > Unity Undercover > Status Update
Rachel
is 12% done
I’m “shelfing” this at 12% because the extremely large amounts of inner monologuing that hold up the entire book PLUS cause each MC to make STUPID choices that are the EXACT OPPOSITE of what would further the plot and bring us action/resolution are giving me no end to frustration. I put up with it for the first 3 books but it’s gotten old and I need a break.
— Apr 10, 2025 10:49AM
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