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Donna Walczak
Donna Walczak is 69% done
"I won’t tell you about what I found. I won’t tell you what I saw when I walked into the kitchen (...). I will not tell you what he said to me, only that I had to give the maid a sedative before I could lead her from the little girl’s corpse."

I hate that. It just feels like lazy writing. Tell this horrible thing, bc otherwise I just assume you were worried nothing you would right could live up to the horror implied
Sep 30, 2025 07:35PM
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Donna Walczak
Donna Walczak is 99% done
I would have preferred an ominous, foreboding end. This one felt a little abrupt and almost detached from the story, but I did like the concept.
Sep 30, 2025 07:40PM
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Donna Walczak
Donna Walczak is 69% done
"No, I won’t tell you what she said to me, either. But I am not ashamed to say I wept."

Ugh 😩
Sep 30, 2025 07:36PM
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Donna Walczak
Donna Walczak is 54% done
Succor: assistance and support in times of hardship and distress.
Sep 30, 2025 07:24PM
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Donna Walczak
Donna Walczak is 51% done
I have seen the word penumbra used twice in my life, and in both cases it was by this author.

I suppose if I continue reading her works, it'll eventually become a common word in my vocabulary.
Sep 30, 2025 07:19PM
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Donna Walczak
Donna Walczak is 47% done
Never mind, I think I know exactly where this is going, and if so I fk with it

Think the revolt of Sid's toys in Toy Story, but with a necromancer twist.
I love a good example of bad karma coming back around.
Sep 30, 2025 07:15PM
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Donna Walczak
Donna Walczak is 45% done
I wonder where this is going.

I almost feel bad for the king, who really does ask for so little, but unfortunately sired a monster.
Sep 30, 2025 07:12PM
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