Kaylee’s Reviews > He Sees You When You're Sleeping > Status Update

Everyone in this book is dumb. 🤦‍♀️
If you:
- look at adult websites on the company computer
- make adult content with an obvious screen name while wearing company products after signing a morality clause
- make minimal to no effort to cover up your stalking behavior, from neighbors to covering your literal tracks,
You’re going to have a bad time.
Morality clauses are no joke.

“Are you sure? … Once we start, I don’t know if I’ll be able to stop.” Well, sir, you’d better be able to or you shouldn’t be getting intimate with anyone. CONSENT CAN BE REVOKED AT ANY TIME!! If you continue after your partner says “stop” you are committing assault.
Chloe’s lingerie just vanishes after she’s instructed to turn around. Did she spin her clothes off? Is she a Sim?

In the last 9 pages the word “dominant” was used at least 6 times, 4 of which being used in the phrase “dominant energy.” I know Chloe is excited to discover this side of Jack but does she not know any synonyms?
I feel this aspect of him could have been portrayed better - through action & dialogue rather than Chloe’s insistence he’s got dominant energy.
This video is going to bite her in the ass.

Well one secret is out of the bag … not the most important one, but baby steps, I guess?
Thankfully these idiots are using protection.

“What if he’s early? What if he’s late?”
What if he turns out to be a serial killer? You invited a stranger to your home!
When she finally starts asking herself more serious questions like if someone else shows up or he brings people with him, she calls herself paranoid. Girl!!
If this chick whines about “vanilla” one more time …
This isn’t safe or sane, & consent is a bit iffy.

I know my anxious ass over analyzes messages from people but I don’t think I’ve ever stressed out over the use of ellipses or missed capitalization. Also Jack skips from his freak out to picking up flowers & food on his way to Chloe’s - so apparently they fleshed out the plans he was panicking over.
Jack compares his own situation to George Bailey’s. 🙄
More anxiety about telling Chloe he stalks her.

DON’T GIVE YOUR ADDRESS TO RANDOM MEN ON THE INTERNET!!!
For someone who “has lived in NY all her life” & watches true crime on a regular basis, you’d think Chloe would have more sense than she does. Inviting him to meet you at a club was dumb enough, but giving him your address & agreeing to be put in a very vulnerable position alone with him?
Girl, please think with your brain not your ladybits. Thanks.

Girl, even your stalker is thinking you need to use the buddy system while out on the town! Safety in numbers! Poor Sloane was nearly bored to death by a cryptobro!
“You’re a consenting adult. As long as you felt safe & respected, there’s nothing wrong with exploring your desires.” (p. 180) Okay, Sloane gives decent advice sometimes.
I do need both Chloe & Jack to stop whining about how torn they are.

I’m glad Chloe told Sloane about Tyler & Sloane will back her if she feels she should escalate the issue to their boss. I just wish Chloe saw the threat he poses.
Ladies, please look out for each other when at a club - don’t let your friends disappear with random masked men - that’s a good way for them to get murdered.
Exchanging bodily fluids with strangers at clubs is a great way to get STIs.

Why is Chloe going into the office to pick up more jewelry when Tyler dropped a bunch off at her house the night before?
Chloe’s starting to catch on that some of Jack’s stories / ruses don’t line up.
Stop calling Jack vanilla & yourself soooo dark! Many dudes are gentlemen in the streets & freaks in the sheets - they don’t advertise the latter … & you’re not that unique, Chloe!!!