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CB12 is 52% done
And I completely missed that this MMC is the brother from “pride and protest” until the last chapter I just read.

I thought the Bennet brother was a Black Israelite who couldn’t hold down a job, and I remember him being portrayed as sort of buffoonish — so this characterization feels like a retcon. But I read that 2 years ago so perhaps I’m conflating things.

Anyways Nikki Payne extended universe lfg
Jan 03, 2026 06:08AM
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CB12 is on page 244 of 480
And 480 pages for a contemporary romance is just absurd
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CB12
CB12 is on page 244 of 480
I know she’s acting as the relationship foil right now, but there’s too many chapters back to back to back of the sister being like “ this guy is using you xyz way” over and over again. The reader got it the first few times she said it
18 hours, 5 min ago
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CB12
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First and only book I’ve read that has ever used the term “clapping cheeks” I’ll tell you that
Jan 03, 2026 06:04AM
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And I don’t mind the pop you’re references but Nikki Payne is such a canonically older millennial black auntie and it comes up on her references loll
This man compared her to a muse in Disney’s Hercules

I am cringing a little at them, but in the same way as Hazelwood’s. God bless the millennial aunties!
Dec 30, 2025 07:53AM
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They book needed a better reason they are working together towards the same goal
Dec 30, 2025 07:45AM
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2/2 also his life is a mess but he also is able to seduce all these witnesses idk some of it doesn’t match
I also feel like they are fundamentally trying to do 2 different things. I feel like any evidence she would be able to use in her case would have to be legally obtained and given to the police. They keep pickpocketing things, deceiving people etc in a way a PI maybe? would
Dec 30, 2025 07:45AM
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CB12 is 34% done
Something about this book reads like a first draft. It feels developmentally off like the ideas are kind of sketched out here but someone didn’t go through to connect, question or deepen them.

I also feel like Maurice’s characterization is all over the place. He’s like a black anime nerd with severe allergies, this debonair Mercedes driving/cigar smoking/materalistic Bond like detective and 1/2
Dec 30, 2025 07:41AM
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CB12 is 28% done
What was the point of the vest …is the pacing weird and character’s motivations undercooked, yes but still having the time of my life
Dec 24, 2025 03:09PM
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CB12 is 28% done
Very niche black DMV and religiously traumatized west African immigrant references that I understand ….but I’m the niche this book was written for, and I think most people will be like these characters are annoying

Idk I’m a Maryland supremacist
Dec 24, 2025 03:09PM
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The FMC is a religiously traumatized child of west African immigrants growing up in PG county and a redacted at 28… *Olivia Wilde nods aggressively.*
Dec 19, 2025 07:10PM
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