Avah’s Reviews > Three Shattered Souls > Status Update

i’ve just read a chapter that was a single page long for no reason whatsoever . shut down the presses, close the publishing houses, leave those trees in the paper farm alone until we figure out what the fuck is happening

every chapter ends with a really obtuse conversation, which itself ends with them getting interrupted by some plot moving device, which ends up being basically no issue in the next chapter. yayyyy.

“the scepter pulls water directly out of my body, and now the toll is twice as bad as it was the first time.” brother you should be Dead. like dead dead .. this magic is so ass

the writing is ridiculously bad…