Nicholas Perez’s Reviews > Godkiller > Status Update

I think out of all the POVs so far, Elo is the weakest. He isn't uninteresting, just I don't get a lot from him in comparison.

Oh, so Elo was cursed the whole time.

You went too far, Skedi.

While the prose is not bad, there's a lot of filter verbs and moments of telling where sensory details could've strengthen it.

I do wonder if Skedi is one of the gods who survived the war and got diminutive/reincarnated as another god.

They lost the rest of the group!?

Kissen is a 30-something-year-old woman yet one of her internal thought moments just sounded like a teenage girl.

"That's an interesting fuck you give about it."
Damn, Kissen.

Everyone's met up. Let's go!