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Jude Reynolds
is on page 104 of 224
Another thing I have beef with is that it swaps from 2nd to 3rd perspective randomly and I don’t enjoy it, I understand it’s trying to get you to like feel the actions but I don’t like how the 2nd person perspective is written so it doesn’t hit at all.
— 13 hours, 59 min ago
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Jude Reynolds
is on page 184 of 224
I enjoyed a slight amount of the imagery within the dream section of the 180th pages, but then it just kept going on and made it worse
— 10 hours, 56 min ago
Jude Reynolds
is on page 100 of 224
Got sun screen in my eyes and they’ve hurted all day :(
— Apr 04, 2026 06:46PM
Jude Reynolds
is on page 62 of 224
You know what this book reminds me of? A shitty fanfic that hasn’t learned how to use dialogue yet, doesn’t really have anything going on, and loves to over describe literally fucking everything.
— Apr 04, 2026 12:42PM
Jude Reynolds
is on page 54 of 224
At least I’m learning everything I’d want to avoid in my own writing. Also the fact it doesn’t use quotations for dialogue just kinda enmeshes it into the paragraph and it annoys me much.
— Apr 04, 2026 12:34PM
Jude Reynolds
is on page 54 of 224
I literally can barely get past a page or two before wanting to put it down
— Apr 04, 2026 12:31PM
Jude Reynolds
is on page 47 of 224
I saw someone else describe it as reading a 200 monologue of a high person telling you about how amazing the earth is over and over in slightly different ways and yeahs that’s perfectly describes this book so far, nothing interesting to say
— Apr 04, 2026 12:24PM
