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Ashra
Ashra is on page 130 of 336
such a good concept. all of their parents are asleep and these teenagers are wildly struggling to rule in their absence. love a trans prince and an enby lady(themby?)-in-waiting. I just... the pacing is so weird? the plot itself confuses me?? I feel like they keep making kind of strange decisions and expecting normal results lol.

what's keeping me going is guessing the enchantress...
Jul 06, 2026 01:17PM
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Ashra
Ashra is on page 142 of 336
oh wow. that dance/fight. i loved the "everything heightened, the smells, the surroundings" that was cool
Jul 07, 2026 10:52AM
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Ashra
Ashra is on page 98 of 336
Finally had the chance to sit with this a good while and. The pacing is weird? I'll go back and reread the previous paragraph only to realize no it does sort of drop off into the next scene weirdly. Unexplained things appearing in scenes, weird shifts in time. That sea monster is criminal though. The whole thing happening in the span of a page had me WHEEZING.
Jul 05, 2026 07:39PM
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Ashra
Ashra is on page 28 of 336
I'm not super invested yet... darn!

I could be won over but something about it just reads on a side of silly that I can't get immersed in. maybe it was valencia's angel of death thing??
Jul 03, 2026 10:07AM
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