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Nicholas Perez
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I like the prose and the pacing so far, but goodness, there was like five "girl as fragile as glass" similes/metaphors in the first ten pages.
— Jul 08, 2026 05:16AM
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Nicholas Perez
is on page 70 of 386
Man, I wish my YA prose could be like this. I like how atmospheric Andrew is and there is (mostly) a maturity to the writing and characters.
— 1 hour, 15 min ago
Nicholas Perez
is on page 50 of 386
Kelly Andrew, please let go of the glass girl simile/metaphor. I love the writing so far, but please the glass girl thing is too much already.
— 17 hours, 10 min ago
Nicholas Perez
is on page 40 of 386
Colton seems like a mix between Gansey and Ronan from The Raven Cycle
— 20 hours, 7 min ago
