Josiah’s Reviews > Beware of the Purple Peanut Butter > Status Update

That definitely pushed the silly line over the edge. And as I suspected, there was no real reason to make us choose between the cake crumb and the icing.

Why was a choice necessary? Couldn't I have tried the cake crumb and icing?

Hmm...How convenient that you happened to find the old refrigerator at the dump so quickly.

For a book that started well, this has mostly devolved into a formless free-for-all.

I'm shrunk down so small that I can ride a popsicle stick through the sewers. I hope I don't shrink more, or no one will be able to see and help me.

Back to the book's central branching decision. Will eating the weird peanut butter have better results than the tasteless chocolate cake from Effy's Bakery?

For me, this book is hovering close to one-star territory. At this portion of the text there's almost no regard for internal consistency.

I'm having doubts about this book. In the branch I'm on, at least, continuity regarding when and where you return to normal size is being handled in a fast and loose manner.

What happens if I yield myself to capture and study by Dr. Harlan?

There have been shaky continuity aspects recently. Why did you shrink back down so quickly in the first route, and take such a long time to do so in this one?