❤︎ Bookteafull (Danny) ❤︎’s Reviews > Whidbey > Status Update
❤︎ Bookteafull (Danny) ❤︎
is on page 299 of 372
this just went from 3 to 2 stars w/the final part. narrative structuring changes and now the author is speaking to the reader and showcasing scenes + details away from the main perspectives established - for why???
ALSO - all of part 3, the final part, is one full chapter - that's 95 PAGES - for why (x2)???
— Sep 19, 2026 10:23PM
ALSO - all of part 3, the final part, is one full chapter - that's 95 PAGES - for why (x2)???
2 likes · Like flag
❤︎ Bookteafull (Danny) ❤︎’s Previous Updates
❤︎ Bookteafull (Danny) ❤︎
is on page 213 of 372
something about dis book feels disjointed, it really couldve benefitted from a tighter narrative structure w/a clearer flow. pacing feels a bit stop-and-go.
tbh i won't pick up dis author's work again, i don't think her writing style is for me. still plan on finishing this but did contemplate dnfing.
no likeable characters, so much racism + microaggressions, like, they even feel oddly placed?? shock value maybe.
— Sep 18, 2026 10:15PM
tbh i won't pick up dis author's work again, i don't think her writing style is for me. still plan on finishing this but did contemplate dnfing.
no likeable characters, so much racism + microaggressions, like, they even feel oddly placed?? shock value maybe.
❤︎ Bookteafull (Danny) ❤︎
is on page 143 of 372
Was not expecting this book to take place in Florida and involve CSA w/ one of the main POV being the mother of the perp - who supports + loves her son no matter what. Decided to keep on reading after reflecting on whether or not this would trigger me and... it's fine? Having a LOT of thots tho.
Only graphic scene so far is between a FMC and her gf.
Don't quite think this style of narrative structuring is for me.
— Sep 18, 2026 07:07AM
Only graphic scene so far is between a FMC and her gf.
Don't quite think this style of narrative structuring is for me.