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The narration sounds similar to the narrative who read this book my save your life or the story might save your life. It’s not because I checked, but it sounds like her.
— Sep 20, 2026 08:02PM
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Jack Don
Jack Don is 99% done
4⭐️
Enemies to lover
Academic rivals
Both of those tropes are very light. They’re never truly enemies, but they’re competitive towards one another, and although they are academic rivals on Alice’s mind, Henry never looked at each other as rivals. He just thought it was fun competition because he actually likes Alice and has been liking Alice.
— 8 hours, 3 min ago
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Jack Don
Jack Don is 99% done
In the end she gets caught cause she does a risky task where she kidnaps then trys to save a student, after it comes to light why she did it why that wasn’t worth it what’s more important than money and understanding her own values outside of what other people want And a guy named Henry she finds out that he likes her and has liked her for a long time therefore she feels seen by him but also she sees herself now
— 8 hours, 4 min ago
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Jack Don
Jack Don is 99% done
So something happens where she starts going invisible when she realizes the trigger to go invisible when she starts to feel cold she then decides to make a job out of it doing different task for classmates as she’s invisible and then paying for it because she goes to a very wealthy school and her family needs the moneyso they pay her to do different task while she’s invisible
— 8 hours, 7 min ago
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Jack Don
Jack Don is 99% done
The title is called. If you could see the sun, the main character’s name is Alice Sun
She doesn’t feel seen. She never feel seen, and she doesn’t see herself because she strives to be like the people around her and she puts value in whatever she thinks other people put value in.
— 8 hours, 8 min ago
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Jack Don
Jack Don is 99% done
4⭐️
I really enjoyed the story and I think the title was very creative. The ideas was very creative. I do think it was it made you think about things more so thought-provoking it’s a simple story where it doesn’t feel overstimulating to read. It’s not super deep or complicated and it’s still very enjoyable.
— 8 hours, 8 min ago
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Jack Don
Jack Don is 72% done
This turning into a kidnap mission is crazy
— Sep 23, 2026 08:06PM
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Jack Don
Jack Don is 72% done
— Sep 23, 2026 06:09PM
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Jack Don
Jack Don is 60% done
One mission she never turns invisible. The guy wants to be a date anyway he tells her not to worry about that. He makes it a date they leave she never in night. She has to tell him she can go through the plane or with the job. She feel bad about it cause she was a failure, but I feel the guy feels good about it bc he feels like they were on a date
— Sep 21, 2026 07:55PM
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Jack Don
Jack Don is 60% done
She didn’t greedy about the money
First you need enough money in school as she then that she saying she needs enough money for college. She’s like if I just keep doing a job I’ll keep getting money and Shes sacrifice complete and her focus on her schoolwork.
— Sep 21, 2026 07:54PM
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Jack Don
Jack Don is 43% done
He REALLY likes her, and now bc she’s stressed she’s taking it out on him and he’s just trying to be helpful and patient
— Sep 21, 2026 03:25PM
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