mirabilos’s Reviews > Harry Potter and the Unexpected Lordship > Status Update
mirabilos
is 60% done
Bad spelling occasionally, much worse in first two chapters.
Woefully clichéed in quite some regards.
I was most surprised Harry didn’t ditch Hermine in the first chapter after the first words of her scolding him. I saw it just hurting, and considering the time (rest of school against him after his name came out of the goblet)… no, the premise is a tad unbelievable.
Quite Gary-Stu especially wrt. his prowess…
— Jul 30, 2018 07:14PM
Woefully clichéed in quite some regards.
I was most surprised Harry didn’t ditch Hermine in the first chapter after the first words of her scolding him. I saw it just hurting, and considering the time (rest of school against him after his name came out of the goblet)… no, the premise is a tad unbelievable.
Quite Gary-Stu especially wrt. his prowess…
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