JasperKazai’s Reviews > Creation Mage 2 > Status Update

'I mean, what the fuck do you say to someone who looks like Amber Heard but with none of the issues?' is an actual sentence this author wrote. Jesus fucking christ.
And of course he leaves off with the promise of a few different sex scenes. Of course. Man, this book was a disappointment after how much potential the first had. This fucking sucked. Some of the characters are ok though...

Once again, Justin makes an absolutely stupid and childish joke, but it's received with laughter and treated as if it was a sick burn. It's not, it's just dumb as fuck. Also I guess the author dislikes hard taco shells, but that's just an opinion, yet he acts like it's a fact that they're bad. (Yes, the insult was literally comparing the jerks in question to hard taco shells. Can't make this shit up.)

Ok, first of all, 500 students is not that much - my high school had 1800. Although maybe it is a lot considering it's a school where everyone is weirdly in their mid-20s (in order to avoid any age problems with sex).
We again are told how many women are in the magic world - about 450 out of the 500, he estimates. So I guess we're going to meet all 50 of those men, since he loves introducing more male characters.

Sex on a log flume carnival ride is the right kind of silly dumb for this.
This author is capable of some pretty decent descriptions, when he's not resorting to fucking stupid references, or being otherwise lazy. There are some random dips in quality, where it feels he was phoning it in. I honestly think he's the most mechanically proficient harem author I've read. It's just that I hate so much about the story now.

Lol, he tries to pass off most women being 'easy' in the magical world as some sort of established canon, instead of being the product of lazy writing like it actually is. Besides, it's quite obvious Cecilia will sleep with him once the Mage Games are done, if not before. Hell, he could just say 'hey you'll get extra spells for having sex with me!' to try and convince her.

This motherfucker seriously cited the "unstoppable force meets immovable object" to being a Joker quote from The Dark Knight. That's not from there! I can't tell if the author actually thinks that, or if he's deliberately making Justin stupid. Seeing as everyone in the book laughs uproariously at Justin's fucking terrible 'jokes'... can't tell.
Didn't even bother to give these other frats/sororities names. How lazy

Returning to this, and I was already back to hating it on the second sentence. This guy has the most juvenile sense of humor, it's ridiculous. And it's not even that at least Justin is saying them out loud so the other characters are subjected to it - no, half of them are internal monologue. So it's only the reader that has to put up with all the shit.

I was planning on powering through this to then go try other recommendations, but I just can't do it. It's so bad now. Everything about this 'revenge' plan is idiotic, because there's nothing to get revenge on in the first place! Justin has just decided to antagonize these guys, apropos of nothing.
When I have other things that I actively want to try sitting here waiting... I have to take another break from it.

Now there's a rivalry between Justin and the guys he attacked. I actually went back and reread that passage, just to make sure I hadn't missed something. Nope, Justin just attacks them unprovoked, because he assumed they were going to haze him. And now he's making them out to be some kind of villains. They still haven't done shit worthy of this ire. So fucking stupid. Justin is a massive douchebag, it's unreal

After reading a series that treated both the story and the sex scenes with care, reading this that treats it all like a fucking joke is almost insulting. Not only was it rushed as hell, but I never need to read the phrase 'P. Diddy's earring drawer' during a goddamn sex scene. Jesus christ. I kind of liked the first book of this series, but my patience is vanishing rapidly now.