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Dawn was yellow and frightening. Long lines of thin pale poked down like dad’s fingers when he shouted. Warnings that could not be ignored.
Gave me chills. So evocative
— Sep 07, 2022 02:15AM
Gave me chills. So evocative
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Some of the sky fell from my eyes and dropped onto the bathroom floor.
Literature. Poetry. Ladies and gentlemen *chef's kiss*
— Sep 07, 2022 03:50AM
Literature. Poetry. Ladies and gentlemen *chef's kiss*
Baylan
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I rubbed my stomach, and then I heard it. Mixed in with the clear orchestral birdsong a baby laughed. It bubbled out across the street then up into the bathroom. “I hear you,” I whispered.
It was the dawn’s invitation.
These people have got to stop making me cry like this
— Sep 07, 2022 03:43AM
It was the dawn’s invitation.
These people have got to stop making me cry like this
Baylan
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“Don’t you go ruining Lou’s life with all that rubbish, now—the way you did ours.” She shut the door, and I managed to drive around the corner before the tears fell.
BITCH
— Sep 07, 2022 02:57AM
BITCH

