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Baylan is 71% done
I rubbed my stomach, and then I heard it. Mixed in with the clear orchestral birdsong a baby laughed. It bubbled out across the street then up into the bathroom. “I hear you,” I whispered.

It was the dawn’s invitation.


These people have got to stop making me cry like this
Sep 07, 2022 03:43AM
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Baylan is 73% done
Some of the sky fell from my eyes and dropped onto the bathroom floor.

Literature. Poetry. Ladies and gentlemen *chef's kiss*
Sep 07, 2022 03:50AM
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Baylan is 56% done
“Don’t you go ruining Lou’s life with all that rubbish, now—the way you did ours.” She shut the door, and I managed to drive around the corner before the tears fell.

BITCH
Sep 07, 2022 02:57AM
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Baylan is 49% done
Dawn was yellow and frightening. Long lines of thin pale poked down like dad’s fingers when he shouted. Warnings that could not be ignored.

Gave me chills. So evocative
Sep 07, 2022 02:15AM
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