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Some of the sky fell from my eyes and dropped onto the bathroom floor.

Literature. Poetry. Ladies and gentlemen *chef's kiss*
— Sep 07, 2022 03:50AM
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Baylan is 71% done
I rubbed my stomach, and then I heard it. Mixed in with the clear orchestral birdsong a baby laughed. It bubbled out across the street then up into the bathroom. “I hear you,” I whispered.

It was the dawn’s invitation.


These people have got to stop making me cry like this
— Sep 07, 2022 03:43AM
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Baylan
Baylan is 56% done
“Don’t you go ruining Lou’s life with all that rubbish, now—the way you did ours.” She shut the door, and I managed to drive around the corner before the tears fell.

BITCH
— Sep 07, 2022 02:57AM
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Baylan
Baylan is 49% done
Dawn was yellow and frightening. Long lines of thin pale poked down like dad’s fingers when he shouted. Warnings that could not be ignored.

Gave me chills. So evocative
— Sep 07, 2022 02:15AM
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