Shane’s Reviews > The Eye of the World > Status Update
Shane
is 2% done
I can see where someone might not like the tone at this point. It's all from Egwene's perspective as a 9yo. Specifically the roles of men and women. Her commentary on marriage seems strange. She's 9 if he just put her age at 12/13, it wouldn't have felt so out of place. At the same time, it says girls at 18 and wait a few years to get married, so 21, 22? That actually sounds late for this small rural town vibe.
— Oct 21, 2023 01:35AM
Like flag
Shane’s Previous Updates
Shane
is 26% done
So Moraine is pretty much as I remember. She seems to let the 4 talk more than they should, but I suppose they speak to move the narative forward. I want Lan to be a bit more stoic. He seems a bit too cranky, and not as understanding as Id like.
— Oct 30, 2023 05:53AM
Shane
is 11% done
Chapter 5, and the trollocs attack. I didn't thInk it was this early. Thought there would be more setup.
— Oct 24, 2023 06:46AM
