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Wait. If Kaien is Aiden's brother, Aiden the alpha, why was Nova so mad when Kane brought Kaien into her den to save the old lady's life?
Lol. That's the problem with binging books, or movies or anything, you find potholes that you normally wouldn't have noticed.
— Nov 16, 2023 10:17AM
Lol. That's the problem with binging books, or movies or anything, you find potholes that you normally wouldn't have noticed.
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Melina
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For eff's sake! Why isn't anyone trying to remove the bullets?!?!
— Nov 16, 2023 12:19AM
Melina
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Iowa City in October ranges from 60° to 40°F, but this book makes it seem like they're in Siberia. "She'd freeze to death in the frozen tundra." There is no tundra in Iowa. And she's not going to freeze in 40° weather, even 35° weather is not particularly dangerous right away. Don't get me wrong, Iowa gets freaking cold, but not in the middle of October.
— Nov 16, 2023 12:12AM
