B*tchy’s Reviews > Vengeance > Status Update
B*tchy
is 62% done
Wait, what happened? I'm so...what about the other interesting stuff brought up?! Are we going to ignore all the meaty bits for redundant sex scenes?! WHY?! I have so many questions and I'm already more than half way done with the book. And why is he now growling so much and cursing like a 12 year-old trying to sound like a bad ass?
— Sep 20, 2015 12:51PM
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B*tchy
is 71% done
Ummm- okay. Yep, this book is off the rails. How do you get a girlfriend to disclose about her abusive childhood? Pull her across your lap and spank her ass, of course!
— Sep 20, 2015 07:52PM
B*tchy
is 59% done
So much plot development potential and now it is falling extremely flat.
— Sep 20, 2015 11:55AM
B*tchy
is 59% done
So what was the point of that tantrum? Exactly nothing was accomplished or achieved. PS, I fell asleep during the sex scene.
— Sep 20, 2015 11:46AM
B*tchy
is 44% done
You can't "nipple" at your bottom lip, and you can't "preen" during sex. What you CAN do is "nibble" and "keen". I also have a feeling that this story deserves a rewrite to be fleshed out more. The idea is there for a solid plot, but the execution needs work. With work, I could see this being a 5 star and optioned for a movie.
— Sep 20, 2015 10:45AM
B*tchy
is 35% done
This story is pretty cool, but the author is in need of a good editor and proof-reader. Proof-reading is beyond important. It helps keep the reader in the moment, and assures that your voice and storyline are conveyed correctly.
— Sep 20, 2015 09:22AM
