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Shawn
Shawn is 18% done
I initially enjoyed the story, but the last 50 pages felt like filler. The characters seem aimless, moving from place to place without a clear in-story explanation why, because it doesn’t seem to matter. I'm puzzled about their motivations. There's a significant event, but the narrative lacks insight into the world's response. The main characters aren't engaging with the situation in an interesting way.
Jan 24, 2024 06:34PM
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Shawn is 18% done
So far, I’m loving them trying to figure out what the Hecks going on
Jan 08, 2024 01:02PM
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Shawn I cannot edit the above progress note but it is 45% into the book


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