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Gosh. Good world building but I can't stand annoying FMC and the poorly written enemies to lovers trope. There's a fine line between flawed and just simply an annoying and dumb character. 1 or 2 star idc. Y'all who like shit like this have poor taste.

Dumbass nameless woman, dumbass FMC, dumbass man. These two women know the rules and still deciced to protect the child. Dumbass. I'm with the man tho he's also a dumbass. Should've used better protection smh.

Gawd this is so cringey. Do i really wanna read this all the way when I've read this far in just a day?

Yet another classic trope of getting horny because your enemy is too hot!! Who cares he's the enemy he's hottt!

Priority dear priority! Don't act like your action won't affect others!!!

Wait. It's kinda bothering me how many male characters I read recently are named Henry...

Her monologue is too much. It's giving pick me energy. Too much of tell and not show.

"Robotically" in a fantasy world.... Is there no similar words?

Ok pick me, keep burning!!!

Huh why did she suddenly ask Maura if Luther said anything about her mother? Ugh I hate when I get into something and there's hints of bad writing like this.

Thomil's been hinted to like Sciona but somehow suddenly there's a line that says he had felt a vicious satisfaction watching horror dawn on her??? If u wanna write complex characters this is not the way.

Idk I've watched something similar with better explanation. I'm just gonna skim from this point. Def a 2 star.

Even someone like Sciona seems to fall in love real quick huh?

Idk I just can't understand the magic system. Not to mention the first chapter that I just can't for my life register at all.

Gawd there's a lot of tell and not show in this book. Also, just stumbled upon "detail" here💀 a modern loan word in a fantasy setting ........ Alright.

Another poorly written chapter. Naia is so childish and dumb here. Typical 17 year old FMC but idk her age exactly or maybe I just forget. The old geezers are also kinda dumb. They said they had people following Naia but they don't know about Nergal?

The word "information" in a fantasy book...

The characters' relationships feel so rushed 🥴

What, he's tryna have sex with Zylia when she just lost her memories? Tho it's obvious this is just bad writing.

She fell in love with the darkness many times, fell in love with a human once ??????? Remy, Sam, Toby, and whoever else is not love?

Teeza losing her memories is such a plot device and there's some inconsistencies so far like when Ibbsin told Teeza that Naia already knows her true identity but then here she is having doubts forgetting what she heard a few days ago.

That's so dumb... Why would they just take Niordri like that? Y'all r fugitives!!

Chapter 6 is so rushed and cringey... Like the writing quality went down a LOT here. The age gap and the development is so messy. Both Ramir and Teeza seem like they're not the same ppl from the previous chapters. Also the moment I read about Naia not wanting Fares to stop hugging her I had an inkling the romance will be cringey...

I'm so excited rereading this this is so good so far

I don't really like how she jumps from man to man. Ig being forgotten makes you want to be close to anyone who's interested with you. And they get physical really quick too. But I still like the writing for this scene. It's passionate and intimate and not in a dirty way. I'm happy Addie can feel real physical intimacy for the first time.

Reread some chapters but the way Henry and Addie getting to know each other is weird. Like all this uncomfortable feeling being seen by someone who just stole something from your shop and then you proceed to go on longer dates is diabolical.

Oh almost forgot. Julian keeps thinking Emma is in love with Mark who's just been there for days and what he just decided to kiss and fuck her? Yeah right. Mark and Cristina is also insta love. Man I wanna DNF so bad.

They're kissing suddenly. Yeah. Oh. They're having sex being all dirty on the sand. Oh my gosh that's so passionate and romantic. Not disgusting at all. Who cares if anyone might see them? Who cares about all the responsibilities Julian has he just needs to fuck right now. Protection or no STDs or not. The random Clace made this worse cause why is everyone peeping and having public sex?