Laroc’s Reviews > Fortunate: Orphan Series Book One > Status Update
Laroc
is 99% done
This was decent especially in the beginning. I liked that mmc fell for FMC almost immediately. I kinda wished he would’ve pursued her harder but that was okay. I love a baseball mmc especially a black one, sign me up. I liked delayed spice though once we got it the writing a was a bit confusing with what was happening.
— Nov 17, 2025 10:40AM
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Laroc
is 99% done
Especially with her old wannabe pimp harassing her there before she quit. It just annoyed me how clearly dumb this move was and obvious for it to go bad. In the end I understood all the rationalizing and explaining their sides during their break but it felt like I was listening in a counseling session and not reading a romance book. In the end it was authors first book so it was all around good.
— Nov 17, 2025 10:44AM
Laroc
is 99% done
FMC kinda pissed me off with all her faux independence and the drama with kat who we barely even got to rad much interaction just her constantly MIA and then getting assaulted. The last part of the book dragged with FMC going back to the club and asking her boss who was trash for a chance to teach the girls to dance just seemed dumb to me
— Nov 17, 2025 10:42AM
