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So another god bound Skedi and Inara together?

— 9 hours, 39 min ago

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Nicholas Perez is on page 251 of 304

Slightly cringe dialogue moment and rushed romance. Ugh.

— 1 hour, 33 min ago

Nicholas Perez is on page 222 of 304

I think out of all the POVs so far, Elo is the weakest. He isn't uninteresting, just I don't get a lot from him in comparison.

— Feb 11, 2026 01:36PM

Nicholas Perez is on page 211 of 304

They're finally at Belnraden.

— Feb 11, 2026 10:08AM

Nicholas Perez is on page 197 of 304

Oh, so Elo was cursed the whole time.

— Feb 11, 2026 05:10AM

Nicholas Perez is on page 174 of 304

You went too far, Skedi.

— Feb 09, 2026 01:34PM

Nicholas Perez is on page 163 of 304

While the prose is not bad, there's a lot of filter verbs and moments of telling where sensory details could've strengthen it.

— Feb 09, 2026 05:36AM

Nicholas Perez is on page 142 of 304

I do wonder if Skedi is one of the gods who survived the war and got diminutive/reincarnated as another god.

— Feb 06, 2026 01:33PM

Nicholas Perez is on page 131 of 304

They lost the rest of the group!?

— Feb 06, 2026 10:09AM

Nicholas Perez is on page 121 of 304

Kissen is a 30-something-year-old woman yet one of her internal thought moments just sounded like a teenage girl.

— Feb 06, 2026 05:27AM

Nicholas Perez is on page 101 of 304

"That's an interesting fuck you give about it."
Damn, Kissen.

— Feb 05, 2026 01:35PM

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